Abstract= In this essays what the main idea was for us to do is use a visual image in order to prove the argument of your choosing. I chose to use the same argument as my last essay but in more depth choosing a smartwatch and my prime example. The argument being “Does technology have a positive or negative impact on your health.” Since i use a smartwatch the image would be showing it with the slogan of “A step into a healthy life”. In other words this essay helps us think in the mindset of advertisement by having a better understanding of our audience and being able to choose who they are.

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Abstract= In this essay our goal was to write about a debatable topic preferably in the theme of english. However in my essay i chose the issues of technology having an effect in our modern health. The research question is “Has technology improve or harmed our personal health”. This essays would show the stance that i take on the topic with supported details by primary sources and secondary literatures. It would be mostly positive effects towards our health but also a different perspective towards technology, in this case it would be negative.

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Abstract= In this essay what we were asked to do is to state out the rhetorical strategies that the author had used in order to get the readers attention. In other words a rhetorical analysis essay. The rhetorical situation thats happening in Amy tans essay is pathos, ethos and logos and how i dive deep into on how the author is using is. The purpose of this essay is to let audience know what happens behind the doors, in other words to look at essays in the point of view of the authors. This assignment you see exactly that on how i try to find the rhetorical strategies that Amy Tan is using.

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Hey my name is Derrick, Im a 2nd year at CCNY college. Majoring in history,  with the hopes of becoming a professor in history specifically U.S history. At the same time having a part time job as a waiter.